SOME……(Some Of My Emotions…)

Sometimes…..

This word ( sometime) start at some place,

At some phase of my life…..

THIS word defines only, some of you, And Some people of you…….

THIS Word (some) start when I’m able to use word,

Firstly, read it as a word,

But, Time and people,

make me able to use this word….

LIKE memories of;

SOMEONE,

At SOMEWHERE,

At SOMETIME,

At SOMEPLACE,

Evokes…..

SOME OF MY EMOTIONS…..

SOME OF MY EMOTIONS….

It’s been 30 days…..

When someone leaves me,

without informing……

30 days of being crying, in heart,

but no tears……

30 days of being seeking someone,

but no eyesight…..

30 days of praying, with my dead voice,

but no words…..

30 days of writing,

but no ink……

THESE 30 days wants to symbolize,

SOME OF MY EMOTIONS……

Seeing someone to be mute,

in front of you, is like a person…..

WHO faint, with no color….

WHO stop, with no plosives…..

WHO breathe, with no sigh….

WHO frame, with no picture…..

THEY wants me to remember,

SOME OF MY EMOTIONS…..

And right now,

I am writing with some energy, in my hand,

And Still…

MY pen wants me to write,

Some of my emotions…

THIS makes my nose to flow,

But,

Still….

MY tears wants me to flow,

SOME OF MY EMOTIONS…..

65 Comments

  1. SAIFULLAH says:

    Nice one dear.. Keep it up!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Ashok says:

      Great job!
      May Allah bless you with all the happiness and success in your life.

      Liked by 2 people

      1. I hear u says:

        Thank you.
        Ameen.

        Liked by 1 person

    2. Nauman says:

      Amazing

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Namra says:

    Awesome😍😍

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Jabir Butt says:

      Excellent work and great job.
      You choose a unique content. “Some of my emotions”.
      Keep going.

      Liked by 2 people

  3. RAJA SHOAIB ULFAT says:

    MASHALLAH GOOD SISTER
    KEEP IT UP
    WELL DONE
    VERY GOOD JOB
    INSHALLAH YOU WILL SUCCEED IN ONE DAY

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  4. Awesome keep it up 😇

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  5. faiza khan says:

    nice

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  6. KK says:

    Mesmerising lines! Well done 👍

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    1. Jabir Butt says:

      Yes, I agreed. She wrote with full emotions.

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    2. I hear u says:

      thanks. These line are my reality

      Liked by 1 person

      1. KK says:

        Blessings to you, yam 🙏

        Liked by 1 person

      2. I hear u says:

        Likewise. And thanks

        Liked by 1 person

  7. hgamma says:

    The good bye
    without words
    it stays
    the pain
    of the tears
    in one
    flow
    for years
    pour out
    to let leave

    Liked by 4 people

    1. Jabir Butt says:

      well said sir.

      Liked by 2 people

  8. zamar ali says:

    This is my faviourite poem from all of you, you had written.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      It is also mine faviourite.

      Like

      1. zamar ali says:

        Good taste

        Liked by 1 person

  9. Alexander says:

    This also evoke some of my emotions, truly or pure emotions lie in this

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Indeed, it is full of true emotions and tears.

      Like

  10. lifeofstring says:

    Still you have got some emotions.

    Liked by 1 person

  11. jungle life says:

    Very pure emotions, and it’s true that sometimes we remember someone

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Thanks, its because I am a writer of emotion.

      Like

  12. crazy bee says:

    Hard to digest these emotions.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Bitter reality

      Like

  13. cool girls says:

    😚😚😚😚😚😚

    Liked by 2 people

  14. beauty plus says:

    Kind of emotional and sad.But life is temporary and this ia the fact

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  15. Key of speed says:

    This enable me to remark on Some of your emotions.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Well managed to answered

      Like

  16. Key of speed says:

    I had read all of your writings, they are full of emotions. Well deserved the title of Writer of Emotions.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much that means alot.

      Like

  17. Qumar Butt says:

    Great piece

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    1. I hear u says:

      That’s pleasurable

      Like

      1. Alex says:

        Yes itbis

        Like

  18. masam butt says:

    I really like the flow of emotions in different streams

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    1. I hear u says:

      Oh really, thank you so much

      Like

  19. ask david says:

    Literally so pure and full of emotions

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much

      Liked by 1 person

      1. ask david says:

        mine pleasure dear. Always enjoy your life.

        Liked by 1 person

  20. Elen says:

    Spote on

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you deae

      Like

      1. Elen says:

        M.P

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  21. Ranjhan says:

    Reality hits hard🙁 Sometimes we really can’t control our emotions.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Yes, I agreed. We had to express our emotions, otherwise our body will become a bust bin.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Ranjhan says:

        Ya actually

        Liked by 1 person

  22. sonalime1009 says:

    Nice one
    Full of emotions

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear.

      Liked by 1 person

  23. eunice says:

    This is great. Thanks, for sharing.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Mine pleasure. Thank you for reading it out

      Like

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