Step…..

Allah whisper in unborn ear…

I'd preserved you, for time..
But don't be sad,
I will with you, for everytime,
I know, you need me alot,
Now, I am landing you,
In secure place of this Universe,
Of no auguries, and no sentences...
For I know, your first step
lies in swift of air,

For I know, your first nap
lies in the lap of mother,

For I know, your first smile
lies in the elements of unknown,

For I know, your first cry
lies in the emotions of pain...
You'll know then
What you are...

The second step, no question mark
The step of shivering feet,

Enabling you from air to sky
Styling you from hair to tie,

"EN" will bye you from able,
I'll hye you from table...
They will simile you by doll
They will training you for lie,
They will base you for essential
They will bake you for temperature,

They will bye you from train,
I will hye you from rain...

You will play piano of innocence
I will delay vibes of experience,

You will dance clay of equality
I will make way of reality,

You will stay acting of Florence
I will stay collecting of West winds,

WEST will bye you from EAST,
I will hye you from Feast...

Then

They will show you how to step,
pushing you toward the third step...
They will call you disabled
I will show, you're differently abled...
"DIS" will bye you from Able,
I will hye you from cable...

58 Comments

  1. areebameer says:

    Masterpiece

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much for your beautiful feedback

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    2. Rida batool says:

      Kamal kr di yrrr🥺❤️❤️

      Liked by 3 people

    3. Rida batool says:

      It’s very motivational ❤️

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  2. zamar ali says:

    Wait, It is now going to be one of my faviourite motivational poem and you had beautifully portrayed the messages from Allah to his creation. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Lots of love for you.

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Its my pleasure, that you love my poem. Thank you so much for your kind love and support.

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  3. Sweet life. says:

    Awesome, well deserved the title “writer of emotions” , Seriously I love this poem.

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much for your support and words.

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      1. Sweet life. says:

        You deserve it

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  4. Sweet life. says:

    And also you had beautifully blend both Allah’s message and also the hurdles the person will face, I mean child.

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Sweet life. says:

        Mine pleasure

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  5. beingmylife says:

    Great job YAM. I like your writting style, and selection of your words for your poem.

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Ohh, Thank you so much. I like this that you like my poem.

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  6. Jae franklin says:

    Amazing, I like how you wove it, so poetic.. kudos

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much.

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      1. Jae franklin says:

        My pleasure fellow sage

        Liked by 3 people

      2. I hear u says:

        Do I deserve this. I really don’t know. But thank you so much.

        Liked by 1 person

  7. jungle life says:

    Great piece

    Liked by 3 people

  8. KarenLo says:

    Nice work, the use of words are excellent!. I have one question though, where is this secure place?

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      In the lap of mother

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      1. KarenLo says:

        I see, thank you😊

        Liked by 1 person

  9. clayfoot2 says:

    The beauty of poetry is in both the words expressed & the resonance they produce. A poet often has one thing, one subject, one theme in mind as the words flow out without realizing how much more the poems might say to those who read them. Resonance.
    Lovely work! 🙂

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear. And I agreed to your words.

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thats relaxing

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    1. I hear u says:

      thank you dear

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  10. Key of speed says:

    Damn beautifull. I like it.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      oh thats my pleasure. Thank you so much for your love

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  11. beauty plus says:

    I love this line the most
    They called you disabled
    I will show, you’re differently abled..

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Oh that really so sweet of you. Thank you so much for your kind love.

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear.

      Liked by 1 person

  12. life to live says:

    I loved it

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      that means alot

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  13. Qumar Butt says:

    Connection with the God

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      That’s the content and main theme

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      1. Alex says:

        Yeaah

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  14. masam butt says:

    i really like the connection of a child with God through your words. I hope that it will maintain

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    1. I hear u says:

      But today, it reare

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    1. I hear u says:

      oh really. Thank you so much my dear

      Liked by 1 person

  15. the adrian says:

    you choose very good picture, it suit this content.

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    1. I hear u says:

      Oh thats nice

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  16. ask david says:

    Irresistable, fantastic, and pure connection of God with his human being. I love this poem.

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    1. I hear u says:

      Oh thank you so much David.

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  17. Elen says:

    I love this poem of yours. It’s really an epic poem.

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    1. I hear u says:

      Indeed. Thanks you so much. Have a great day.

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  18. Ranjhan says:

    Beautiful written and very motivating!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear for visiting.

      Liked by 1 person

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