Periods…..不不

Here I come again,

as always..
Here to make you feel pain,

as always..
Here to change your gare,

as always..
Here to crack your cramp,

as always..
Here to make you feel shame,

as always..
Here I come again,

as always..
Then I said;

Don't knock the door for somedays,

I'm just freed from that chain..不不不不不

32 Comments

  1. Faiza khan says:

    Deep reality that society don’t accept or ignore… Explained in a very superb way by a talented girl

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I agreed. That is really a very sensitive topic in society. Thats why I want to change that concept. Thank you so much dear.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. ridhibatool says:

        You explain such a sensitive topic In a deep way….!
        Keep it up歹

        Liked by 4 people

      2. I hear u says:

        Thanks dear for compliment.

  2. Faiza khan says:

    Deep reality that society don’t accept or ignore… Explained in a very superb way by a talented girl

    Liked by 4 people

  3. For Those Who Regularly

    Bleed And Feel Pain

    Their Empathy For

    Others Develops More

    In Sympathy and Compassion

    This Way True Blood For Life

    Both Flesh And Love This Way

    And Hehe i Guess this Clears

    Up Which Gender Yam

    Is Very Wise

    Indeed

    Of Course in Poetry
    Labels Don’t Matter

    HeART SPiRiT SoUL
    Comes Thru Unencumbered
    By Limitations That Life Otherwise Makes..:)

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      You really got the deep point inside it, that I wanted to know people. Thank you so much my deep reader.

      Liked by 3 people

      1. Always A Pleasure
        my Wise Poetic

        FRiEnD

        Yam

        Breathing
        Poems of Life

        Liked by 2 people

      2. I hear u says:

        Always. You too….

        Liked by 1 person

  4. zamar ali says:

    Nice flow of thoughts. Deep message inside it

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      you got it. thanks

      Like

  5. Elen says:

    You nailed it dear.

    Liked by 2 people

  6. Priti says:

    Nice thinking! Well written thank you.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      With pleasure. Thanks for reading it out

      Like

      1. Priti says:

        welcome.

        Liked by 1 person

  7. Sweet life. says:

    Last line is really funny

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Ranjhan says:

    True poem. Brought out the pain through poem. Deep hidden pain.綽

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      You got the point. Pain lies in pain…

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Ranjhan says:

        Right.

        Liked by 1 person

  9. life to live says:

    Pain…..

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      I remember a song from this word pain不
      Pain you make me a beliver..

      Like

  10. sheamusheany says:

    I like your concept of conveying message

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much. I am glad to know this that you like it

      Like

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