Omen….



Day of white but black,
something is going to collapse..


Moon and night is on map,
lightning is cracking like a flash..


Memories with water in sack,
passing like a grave of sand..


Tears ranked over racks,
smiles smashed like a tracks..


Venerals vamp over rag,
vibes are streching like a Ram..

34 Comments

  1. SMiLes Dear Yam THeRE
    Are Goats And Sheep
    Sheep Mindlessly

    Follow
    Goats
    Surefooted

    Continue Climbing Mountains
    Moral oF A Story Be A Goat

    Don’t Get
    Trapped

    In Storms of Sheep..:)

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    1. I hear u says:

      I will. And thanks for using this example. I understand it.

      Liked by 3 people

      1. Thanks Yam…
        Happy Weekend
        To You With SMiles😊

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      2. I hear u says:

        You too my dear friend.

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      3. 😊😊

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  2. KatYa says:

    Hopefully nothing bad happens

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Hope so. Because I am feeling like this poem from some days..

      Liked by 2 people

  3. Betsey says:

    Have faith that everything will be good happens and fine.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Hope so. thanks for your kind support

      Like

  4. Sweet life. says:

    Nice words. Hope everything is good. I like the rhythm

    Like

  5. Alex says:

    Is it your condition?

    Liked by 1 person

  6. KK says:

    Beautifully worded poem, but I’m little worried. Stay happy and blessed 😊

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thanks. Hope so, because I am still in that condition.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. KK says:

        Come out of that, my friend, and write more and more poetry.

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      2. I hear u says:

        This is diaturbing me so much, like a chaos or war inside me.

        Liked by 1 person

      3. KK says:

        I’m getting worried. Please take care !!

        Liked by 1 person

  7. Elen says:

    Hope everything goes well.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      I also hope so

      Like

  8. Jeff Flesch says:

    Excellent. ☺️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you my dear friend. jeff.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Jeff Flesch says:

        Most welcome. Always.

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      2. I hear u says:

        πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

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  9. life to live says:

    I love this line the most
    Memories with water in sack….

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear. I am glad that you like it.

      Like

  10. Rekha Sahay says:

    Beautiful and heart touching. Keep writing!!

    Liked by 2 people

  11. Amazing words used to create suspense.
    Hope all is well.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Now all is well. Thanks

      Liked by 1 person

  12. jungle life says:

    Beautiful way to express feeling

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you dear

      Like

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