Memories of life…..



Standing like a shadow
of no feelings and no tatoo,

Ticking back my meadow
of no soil and no tomatoo,


Life of a plant as some rice,

of some fertilizers and some fungi


Life of a animal as some knight,
of some Deadulus and some in king fights

Life of a man as some coin,

of some with legs and some with sight


Life of a storm as some fine,

of some in ventricles and some in mines

Men have two lifes
one with movement and one with light,

Physical have dreams and desires
Light have feelings and sighs..

68 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    The last lines are so profound Yam. Beautiful poem

    Liked by 5 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I am glad that you like it. Thank you so much dear.

      Liked by 2 people

      1. Sadje says:

        My pleasure

        Liked by 2 people

      2. I hear u says:

        πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

        Liked by 1 person

  2. hgamma says:

    The woman
    the gate
    to life

    the man
    should be humble
    he got from his mother
    being on earth

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I agreed tp your words. We all should remeber this. Thank you so much for reading it out

      Liked by 2 people

  3. eunice says:

    Very interesting, playful and thoughtful.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thanks for reading it out. Your words means alot.

      Like

  4. Betsey says:

    Your poem is full of imagery and alot of poetic devices. I like this concept of poem. Much more toward the lesson of life

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Indeed. Thank you for complimenting

      Like

      1. Betsey says:

        Mine pleasure dear

        Liked by 1 person

  5. Sweet life. says:

    Awesome piece dear. I love this perspective

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I am glad that you love this. Thank you

      Like

      1. Sweet life. says:

        No need my dear, YAM. You deserve this

        Liked by 1 person

      2. I hear u says:

        πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

        Like

  6. Faiza+khan says:

    Life wonderfully define by superb girlπŸ’–β€οΈπŸ’–

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I am flattered. Thank you so much dear. That means alot.

      Like

  7. Connecting Emotions
    With Senses in Synergy

    Becoming Mind And Body
    Whole Dear Yam in Energies

    Moving, Connecting, Co-Creating
    Happy New Year Always Real Now

    Together Indeed BeLieve, BeLeaf

    BeLoving

    Living

    Nourishing
    Tree Ocean
    Water Whole Complete
    Be Human Be Human Yes Be Human
    Inhaling Peace Exhaling LoVE iN JoY
    oF LiGHT Giving Sharing Caring Healing
    These Roots Deeper With Least Harm Yes Love ALL..:)

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    1. I hear u says:

      You created imagery very well. Thank you so much my deep reader. I am very glad to find you as a writer and reader

      Liked by 2 people

      1. Indeed Dear Yam i Am
        Happy to Find You As
        A Deep Writer
        And Reader

        Too Also A
        Nice Young
        Muslim
        Woman
        From Pakistan
        As The Crescent
        Moon Cradles

        Star

        Of Your
        Flag And
        True i Do
        Have Two
        Other Deep
        Poetry Writer
        Young Muslim
        Women FRiEnDS
        From Pakistan too

        Nice
        Country
        Of Folks
        It Seems to me😊

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      2. I hear u says:

        Thank you so much, I am very very glad to find this. Thank you so my friend.

        Liked by 1 person

      3. Pleasure
        All Mine😊

        Liked by 2 people

      4. I hear u says:

        πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

        Liked by 1 person

      5. 🏝😊

        Liked by 1 person

  8. Ultra says:

    Beautiful poem πŸ™‚

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear

      Liked by 1 person

  9. Human Being says:

    Impressed. Speechless.

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear. I am glax to know this

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Human Being says:

        😊

        Liked by 2 people

  10. KK says:

    You have covered so many aspects in one poem. Life as coin is awesome. Well penned πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear, kk. I am glad that you likes it

      Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thanks dear

      Like

  11. This one,you have lifted the standard.The wordcraft is excellent and the content is rich.
    We await a book!!!!πŸ˜‰

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Well, A Book, so many pages🀣🀣. I will try. But thank you so much dear for encouraging me.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Hahahah try try not for money ONLY but for posterity!

        Liked by 2 people

      2. I hear u says:

        Sure I will try.

        Like

  12. Oo this is a nice blog✨✨

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Oh, thank you so much dear.

      Liked by 2 people

  13. robertcday says:

    It’s at times like these that I wish I understood poetry. I can dimly sense the profound depth of what you say but, sadly, my understanding is not enough. How do you suggest I improve?
    Kind regards,
    Robert.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thanks for being true. You can understand poetry when you relate yourself, your life with the title of poetry then the words kf poetry. Because poetry contain imagination and emotional approach.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. robertcday says:

        That’s a nice way to look at it. We are exchanging imaginations and emotions by sharing poetry. πŸ˜ƒ

        Liked by 2 people

      2. robertcday says:

        I like your way of looking at things. I read a poem or mine out on the radio yesterday. It was called Green. Not many emotions in that one, though. πŸ˜†

        Liked by 2 people

      3. I hear u says:

        Thank you. I happened at primary stage.

        Liked by 1 person

      4. robertcday says:

        Your welcome. Sorry, but what does ‘I happened at primary stage’ mean?

        Liked by 2 people

      5. I hear u says:

        It’s misprinting in words. I wanted to say that
        It happened mostly at primary stage when you start understanding poetrt

        Liked by 2 people

      6. robertcday says:

        I will continue to try to understand poetry then. πŸ™‚

        Liked by 2 people

      7. I hear u says:

        πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

        Liked by 2 people

  14. Those last powerful lines bring it all together. Awesome poem.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear. I am glad that you found this

      Liked by 2 people

  15. Athira says:

    Well written

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Athira says:

        My pleasure!

        Liked by 2 people

  16. sheamusheany says:

    Your poetry had a true and Deep philosophy of life.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I am glad you found it. Thank you so much

      Liked by 1 person

  17. Nelsapy says:

    Reblogged this on Nelsapy.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thanks for reblogging dear

      Liked by 2 people

  18. gabychops says:

    I like as much on second reading!

    Joanna

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I am glad that you like it. Thank you dear so much.

      Liked by 1 person

  19. Daniel says:

    Epic poem dear. So many aspects of life in some words. Your poetry reflect you a kind of philosopher.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you dear so much. Some people used to say me a philosopher, but truely I am not

      Like

  20. Cool Budies says:

    Epic piece of writing.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Thanks alot dear

      Like

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