Flying back to my Street…..





Don’t tell anybody, I’m on my way.


Back to my life, my smile

from formal back to informal,

Previous to my mistakes

from cabbage stamp to flying slippers,

Flash of my breakfast

from words like 'bitch' to the words in starter 'idiot',

Memories of my bitter yougert

from naked feets to random fits,

Revising my chapters of unsolicited life

from fantasy of hearts to illusion of behavior,

These evocations and time are like sand

feels like in no time I'm on land..

31 Comments

  1. Faiza+khan says:

    Fantastic framework of memories designed by a mind blowing writer

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I am glad that you like it. Thabks for your kind appreciation.

      Liked by 1 person

  2. SMiLes Dear Yam Isn’t It True How Some Avenues

    Set Us Free to Be All Of Who We Felt We Couldn’t Be Before

    And How Some Avenues We Return to Take Us Back To Where
    We Were Before Now

    How Fortunate Are We

    To Be Able to Ascend
    And Transcend Wherever

    We May Fall or Rise to Authentically
    Be Who We Feel and Sense to Be Now

    Such A Challenge Though Depending
    On How Far A Flight Back Home is

    To Rise Again

    Free Enough

    To Retain Balance
    of Who We Really Feel
    And Sense to Be Genuinely Indeed..:)

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I had just wrote only one incident. The tragedy that happen to her is after that event of remembering.
      Thanks for reading dear, I agree to your words

      Liked by 2 people

      1. That’s Sad Dear
        Yam So Hard to
        Forget When

        Folks Now
        Remember
        What Was

        Too Hard
        For Reality Then πŸ™

        Liked by 2 people

    2. hgamma says:

      It takes courage
      the unevenness
      of life to endure

      Liked by 3 people

      1. I hear u says:

        And courage needs your patience.

        Liked by 1 person

      2. hgamma says:

        the humility
        endures
        that what
        we don’t
        to change
        us know
        what we
        not
        to change
        are able to

        Liked by 3 people

      3. I hear u says:

        Exactly…

        Liked by 2 people

  3. Shaher bano says:

    I have big ansuus in my eyes.. Janii… To see u hereπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί… May good bless u more

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      ansuus🀣🀣. Too touching

      Liked by 1 person

  4. hgamma says:

    We’re all on the road
    whether the others talk about it or not
    the way
    between the inner world and the outer world
    the reality of the soul
    the human life
    holds together through all lows and highs
    our real doing and creating
    to understand the soul’s own dream
    and step by step in awakening
    trying to get the best out of it

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Agreed to your point of view.

      Liked by 2 people

  5. Great piece, creative framework.
    You are getting better by each post!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you dear so much. I am glad to know this.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Wonderful.
        Keep at it the future is bright!

        Liked by 2 people

      2. I hear u says:

        SureπŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

        Liked by 1 person

  6. Priti says:

    Beautifully written ! memories take you on land! Well shared πŸ‘Œβ˜Ί

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you dear so much for your keen words.πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Betsey says:

    Humorous poem dear but the last couple is quite intellectual. I like this

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I am glad that you like this

      Like

  8. KK says:

    This again is a beautiful poem. The last two stanzas are awesome. Well penned πŸ‘Œ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      I am really glad to know this. Thank you so much for such appreciative words

      Liked by 1 person

      1. KK says:

        It’s my pleasure 😊

        Liked by 1 person

      2. I hear u says:

        πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

        Liked by 1 person

  9. Daniel says:

    Your sense of humor is really good 😊😊

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Thanks for the compliment, Daniel

      Like

  10. Cool Budies says:

    Beautiful

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

      Like

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