The Sprained kite…..


Her empty hands,
shows her inner barrness..

Her dry eyes,
reflects her devastated feelings..

Her thick voice,
portrays her neglected harmones..

Her reserved face,
demonstrate her sprained kite..

All of these gestures of that shadow,
realized me the elements of am actual being...

36 Comments

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much.

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  1. eunice says:

    Day in and day, her foes, keep on reporting themselves to her, through their posts.

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    1. I hear u says:

      You can say that.
      Thank you for reading it out

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  2. eunice says:

    The devastated are those who broke into other peopleโ€™s WhatsApp camps and are caught.

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    1. I hear u says:

      ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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  3. SMiLes Dear Young Yam
    From Pakistan so Nice to

    See A Soul Deep Post From
    You Again Yet i Distinctly Remember

    You Singing You Must Have Muse to Write

    And Surely This Kite That Seems Grounded

    Looking For Wings to Once Soar in Delight

    Of Humanity
    in Balance

    Is Looking For
    Space to Fly Again
    my FRiEnD in Colors

    No Longer Bare in Hands of Love..:)

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    1. I hear u says:

      She is searching for her wings to fly. But circumstances and changes are so strong that she cann’t find her wings.

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      1. SMiles Dear
        Yam i Will
        Surely Pray
        That Changes
        Come Where

        She
        Finds
        Her Wings๐Ÿ™

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      2. I hear u says:

        Sure. Thank you dear so much.

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      3. Welcome
        my FRiEnD๐Ÿ˜Š

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      4. I hear u says:

        ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚

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      5. hgamma says:

        The prayer
        help her
        with feet
        kicked
        human dignity
        the woman nothing

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      6. I hear u says:

        I like this one alot. Wise words

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    2. hgamma says:

      The woman is never a dragon
      the devil is the male patriarchal self
      the man
      which has oppressed women for millennia

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      1. I hear u says:

        This is just confined to the psychy of a person. And their psychy help them to build their point of view to see the world, which will decide your part as a good or evil in tge World.

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      2. hgamma says:

        The soul is the same for all of us.

        No human being can really understand and grasp the depth of the soul in another human being.

        I don’t have to tell anyone what the innermost part of a person wants from them, what the destiny of the soul really has to say to them about their life.

        Nobody is allowed to limit his judgment only to the psyche of a person.

        And how the psyche helps me build my perspective
        to see the world
        that i am trying to think about my role as a bad guy
        or good person
        just for me,
        not to decide for the world
        that is my sole responsibility.

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      3. I hear u says:

        Practically, It’s the process of our mind development.

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      4. hgamma says:

        The soul
        the ghost
        is in us

        the soul the spirit
        is as old as
        humanity itself

        the one
        overelevate
        with their hubris
        the judgment of others
        and mean themselves
        with her mind

        through their handling
        in practice and mind
        a process
        with their beliefs
        in ordinary people
        set in motion
        to be able to

        what in others
        really takes place
        will and must me
        remain a secret

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      5. I hear u says:

        Respected.

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  4. Sadje says:

    Very heartfelt poetry Yam. Good to see you back

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear, Sadje.

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  5. hgamma says:

    her empty hands
    ask for mercy

    her dry eyes
    her dry mouth
    show the injuries
    of the nefarious men

    her thick voice
    the last cry for help
    of an abused battered woman

    her reserved face,
    the fear of femicide
    the sharp dagger
    one of life
    frustrated soulless male

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    1. I hear u says:

      Well put. Your words are the 2nd perspective to be taken. Thank you so much, dear poet.

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  6. Americaoncoffee says:

    Beautiful thoughts!

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you dear so much. Have a great day.

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Sikiladi says:

    She is a survivor
    She shall turn out victorious!

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    1. I hear u says:

      She is and she will..
      Thank you dear so much.

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  8. KK says:

    Wow! Beautiful thoughts, so creative! Well penned, my friend ๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you kk. Much appreciated

      Liked by 1 person

      1. KK says:

        My pleasure ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      2. I hear u says:

        ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. Jeff Flesch says:

    Wonderfully expressed, Yam.

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thanks, Jeff so much

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  10. Smile big says:

    Seemed suspicious but also pathatic

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    1. I hear u says:

      Both are relative

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