Allah whisper in unborn ear…
I'd preserved you, for time..
But don't be sad,
I will with you, for everytime,
I know, you need me alot,
Now, I am landing you,
In secure place of this Universe,
Of no auguries, and no sentences...
For I know, your first step
lies in swift of air,
For I know, your first nap
lies in the lap of mother,
For I know, your first smile
lies in the elements of unknown,
For I know, your first cry
lies in the emotions of pain...
You'll know then
What you are...
The second step, no question mark
The step of shivering feet,
Enabling you from air to sky
Styling you from hair to tie,
"EN" will bye you from able,
I'll hye you from table...
They will simile you by doll
They will training you for lie,
They will base you for essential
They will bake you for temperature,
They will bye you from train,
I will hye you from rain...
You will play piano of innocence
I will delay vibes of experience,
You will dance clay of equality
I will make way of reality,
You will stay acting of Florence
I will stay collecting of West winds,
WEST will bye you from EAST,
I will hye you from Feast...
Then
They will show you how to step,
pushing you toward the third step...
They will call you disabled
I will show, you're differently abled...
"DIS" will bye you from Able,
I will hye you from cable...
Masterpiece
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Thank you so much for your beautiful feedback
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Kamal kr di yrrr🥺❤️❤️
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Thank u
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It’s very motivational ❤️
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Indeed.
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Wait, It is now going to be one of my faviourite motivational poem and you had beautifully portrayed the messages from Allah to his creation. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Lots of love for you.
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Its my pleasure, that you love my poem. Thank you so much for your kind love and support.
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😊
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Awesome, well deserved the title “writer of emotions” , Seriously I love this poem.
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Thank you so much for your support and words.
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You deserve it
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Thank u
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And also you had beautifully blend both Allah’s message and also the hurdles the person will face, I mean child.
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Thank you so much.
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Mine pleasure
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Great job YAM. I like your writting style, and selection of your words for your poem.
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Ohh, Thank you so much. I like this that you like my poem.
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Amazing, I like how you wove it, so poetic.. kudos
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Thank you so much.
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My pleasure fellow sage
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Do I deserve this. I really don’t know. But thank you so much.
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Great piece
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Thanks
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Nice work, the use of words are excellent!. I have one question though, where is this secure place?
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In the lap of mother
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I see, thank you😊
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🙂
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The beauty of poetry is in both the words expressed & the resonance they produce. A poet often has one thing, one subject, one theme in mind as the words flow out without realizing how much more the poems might say to those who read them. Resonance.
Lovely work! 🙂
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Thank you so much dear. And I agreed to your words.
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Well written!
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Thats relaxing
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Nice!
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thank you dear
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Damn beautifull. I like it.
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oh thats my pleasure. Thank you so much for your love
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I love this line the most
They called you disabled
I will show, you’re differently abled..
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Oh that really so sweet of you. Thank you so much for your kind love.
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So beautiful
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Thank you so much dear.
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I loved it
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that means alot
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Connection with the God
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That’s the content and main theme
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Yeaah
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i really like the connection of a child with God through your words. I hope that it will maintain
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But today, it reare
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Splendid!!🙌
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oh really. Thank you so much my dear
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you choose very good picture, it suit this content.
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Oh thats nice
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Irresistable, fantastic, and pure connection of God with his human being. I love this poem.
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Oh thank you so much David.
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I love this poem of yours. It’s really an epic poem.
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Indeed. Thanks you so much. Have a great day.
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Beautiful written and very motivating!
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Thank you so much dear for visiting.
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