Standing like a shadow
of no feelings and no tatoo,
Ticking back my meadow
of no soil and no tomatoo,
Life of a plant as some rice,
of some fertilizers and some fungi
Life of a animal as some knight,
of some Deadulus and some in king fights
Life of a man as some coin,
of some with legs and some with sight
Life of a storm as some fine,
of some in ventricles and some in mines
Men have two lifes
one with movement and one with light,
Physical have dreams and desires
Light have feelings and sighs..
The last lines are so profound Yam. Beautiful poem
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I am glad that you like it. Thank you so much dear.
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My pleasure
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The woman
the gate
to life
the man
should be humble
he got from his mother
being on earth
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I agreed tp your words. We all should remeber this. Thank you so much for reading it out
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Very interesting, playful and thoughtful.
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Thanks for reading it out. Your words means alot.
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Your poem is full of imagery and alot of poetic devices. I like this concept of poem. Much more toward the lesson of life
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Indeed. Thank you for complimenting
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Mine pleasure dear
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🙂
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Awesome piece dear. I love this perspective
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I am glad that you love this. Thank you
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No need my dear, YAM. You deserve this
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Life wonderfully define by superb girl💖❤️💖
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I am flattered. Thank you so much dear. That means alot.
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Connecting Emotions
With Senses in Synergy
Becoming Mind And Body
Whole Dear Yam in Energies
Moving, Connecting, Co-Creating
Happy New Year Always Real Now
Together Indeed BeLieve, BeLeaf
BeLoving
Living
Nourishing
Tree Ocean
Water Whole Complete
Be Human Be Human Yes Be Human
Inhaling Peace Exhaling LoVE iN JoY
oF LiGHT Giving Sharing Caring Healing
These Roots Deeper With Least Harm Yes Love ALL..:)
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You created imagery very well. Thank you so much my deep reader. I am very glad to find you as a writer and reader
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Indeed Dear Yam i Am
Happy to Find You As
A Deep Writer
And Reader
Too Also A
Nice Young
Muslim
Woman
From Pakistan
As The Crescent
Moon Cradles
Star
Of Your
Flag And
True i Do
Have Two
Other Deep
Poetry Writer
Young Muslim
Women FRiEnDS
From Pakistan too
Nice
Country
Of Folks
It Seems to me😊
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Thank you so much, I am very very glad to find this. Thank you so my friend.
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Pleasure
All Mine😊
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🏝😊
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Beautiful poem 🙂
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Thank you so much dear
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Impressed. Speechless.
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Thank you so much dear. I am glax to know this
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😊
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You have covered so many aspects in one poem. Life as coin is awesome. Well penned 👌👌
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Thank you so much dear, kk. I am glad that you likes it
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Thanks dear
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This one,you have lifted the standard.The wordcraft is excellent and the content is rich.
We await a book!!!!😉
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Well, A Book, so many pages🤣🤣. I will try. But thank you so much dear for encouraging me.
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Hahahah try try not for money ONLY but for posterity!
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Sure I will try.
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Oo this is a nice blog✨✨
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Oh, thank you so much dear.
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It’s at times like these that I wish I understood poetry. I can dimly sense the profound depth of what you say but, sadly, my understanding is not enough. How do you suggest I improve?
Kind regards,
Robert.
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Thanks for being true. You can understand poetry when you relate yourself, your life with the title of poetry then the words kf poetry. Because poetry contain imagination and emotional approach.
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That’s a nice way to look at it. We are exchanging imaginations and emotions by sharing poetry. 😃
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Indeed
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I like your way of looking at things. I read a poem or mine out on the radio yesterday. It was called Green. Not many emotions in that one, though. 😆
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Thank you. I happened at primary stage.
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Your welcome. Sorry, but what does ‘I happened at primary stage’ mean?
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It’s misprinting in words. I wanted to say that
It happened mostly at primary stage when you start understanding poetrt
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I will continue to try to understand poetry then. 🙂
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Those last powerful lines bring it all together. Awesome poem.
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Thank you so much dear. I am glad that you found this
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Well written
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Thank you so much dear
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My pleasure!
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Your poetry had a true and Deep philosophy of life.
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I am glad you found it. Thank you so much
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Reblogged this on Nelsapy.
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Thanks for reblogging dear
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I like as much on second reading!
Joanna
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I am glad that you like it. Thank you dear so much.
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https://wp.me/sd4WoA-desire read mine
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sure
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Epic poem dear. So many aspects of life in some words. Your poetry reflect you a kind of philosopher.
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Thank you dear so much. Some people used to say me a philosopher, but truely I am not
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Epic piece of writing.
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Thanks alot dear
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