Your Promise arrive…..




In the race of rain,
I found bodies with pain


In the basement of my vein,
I found river with your name


In the tape of my brain,
I found series with your clay


In the middle of this chain,
I found Autumn with your break

In the storm of silent rain,
I found grave with your name


In the World of Paradise,
I found promise by your main...

35 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    Profound poem Yam.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear, Sadge.

      Liked by 2 people

  2. Amazing one✨✨

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I am glad to know this dear. Thanks for reading dear. Have a great day

      Liked by 1 person

  3. SMiLes Dear Yam
    Somewhere in The
    Depths of Swamp

    Breathes A
    Spark of

    Love
    Falling
    Deeper

    Waiting to
    Be Matched
    And StrucK iNto Fire Again..:)

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Hope so. Thank you sor reading and commenting me dear deep reader.

      Liked by 2 people

  4. areebameer says:

    πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    Liked by 5 people

    1. I hear u says:

      πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

  5. Emmy_ Fabs says:

    Its awesomeπŸ‘

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear.

      Liked by 1 person

  6. sheamusheany says:

    Really beautiful flow of memories and promise. You are Indeed a philosopher

    Liked by 4 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I don’t know, I am or not. But most of people use to say this. Thank you so much

      Liked by 2 people

  7. KK says:

    A profound piece with wonderful imagery and emotions! So beautifully written, yam!!!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear, kk.

      Liked by 2 people

      1. KK says:

        πŸ˜ŠπŸ’

        Liked by 2 people

  8. Rekha Sahay says:

    Beautiful poem!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thanks dear. πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

  9. Ultra says:

    Your beautiful poems about feelings are extremely emotional, they flow from within.
    Best wishes

    Liked by 5 people

    1. I hear u says:

      That’s so nice of you. I really feel good that you found it.

      Liked by 1 person

  10. Nelsapy says:

    Reblogged this on Nelsapy.

    Liked by 4 people

  11. Gibberish says:

    Nicely penned πŸ‘ŒπŸ’Ÿ

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you dear so much.

      Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      I am glad you felt this

      Like

  12. Ashish kumar says:

    Very well written… Liked it

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I am very happy that you like it. Thanks

      Liked by 1 person

  13. Nice one Yam. Well done.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Pleasurable to know this. Thanks deae

      Liked by 1 person

  14. Betsey says:

    Beautiful picture and emotions crafted by you.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear

      Like

  15. If we pay attention we will find… but so many of us go through life with our eyes wide shut… with the mental refrain: “Woe is me…! Woe is me…!”
    πŸ‡―πŸ‡²πŸ–οΈ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Answer will be within the statement..

      Like

  16. Cool Budies says:

    Sad to know

    Liked by 1 person

    1. I hear u says:

      Yeah. Thanks for visiting

      Like

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