The Day…..

On the day of a beautiful weather.

The wind come to me, and said;

Give me all your depression,
all your sorrows,
full of grief...
Give me all your fake smiles,
which hurt you,
which torn you apart...
Give me all your passions,
who broke you(not only one time),
who burn you...
Give me all your friends,
who skept you,
who framed you...

Then the Rain arrived, and said;

Give me all your drops,
that make your nose to flow...
Give me all your snow,
that icen your heart...

Then my pen said to me,

Give me all your ink,
that make your voice to be dead...

Then, I said to them;

Take all of these things to me,
Just take him back,
from that valley,
from where no one come back...

Silence…..

Silence…..

I said;

These are the episodes of my death,
Don't take them away,
I am with them
They are not from me...

42 Comments

  1. zamar ali says:

    You smashed it again. Everytime I see something new and exciting and also full of purity and emotions.

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    1. I hear u says:

      That’s really so sweet of you. And thank you so much for visiting my writing.

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      1. zamar ali says:

        It’s mine pleasure

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  2. Sweet life. says:

    Damned beautiful. I really love this post. So deep and I also like the elements that you used in it, about whether rain, wind, snow

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    1. I hear u says:

      Yeah, I used to write on something new and unique

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      1. I hear u says:

        For sure. Thank you so much dear for your support

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  3. KK says:

    Wow! Marvellous way to express feelings. Loved it.

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much for your kind love. It’s mine pleasure that you love this.

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      1. KK says:

        You’re welcome my friend 😊

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  4. Alex says:

    Wood. I REALLY like it. So beautiful

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you so much dear

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  5. beauty plus says:

    Great piece and unique one.

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    1. I hear u says:

      Yeah it is. Thank you so much dear for stopping by

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  6. jungle life says:

    You had amazingly describe that day with full of emotions and also the day with beautiful weather.
    Really,I loved it.

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    1. I hear u says:

      I appriciate your words and emotion thank you so much dear

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      1. jungle life says:

        That’s my pleasure

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  7. Beautiful dear. I should have read this early! Thanks for reminding me 😍💐

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    1. I hear u says:

      Mine pleasure.

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  8. welovemenow says:

    Don’t you know how to express feelings to the daaamn point! I just love it

    Liked by 3 people

    1. I hear u says:

      I am glad that you love it. Thank you so much dear for visiting

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      1. welovemenow says:

        You’re welcome!! 😘

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  9. Elen says:

    Stunning, and irresistible. I love the content and words.

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    1. I hear u says:

      I am glad that you like it.

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  10. such a wonderful message!💖

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    1. I hear u says:

      Thank you, Cindy for you kind support.

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      1. It’s my pleasure!

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  11. life to live says:

    Beautiful rhythum and reality

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  12. Gamma Hans says:

    I carry my troubles on my own back.

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    1. I hear u says:

      That is the thing that we all do at some phase of our life.

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      1. Gamma Hans says:

        me for myself
        Step by step

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      2. I hear u says:

        Strength with strength

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      3. Gamma Hans says:

        The strong ones
        mean themselves
        in their real weakness
        above all
        lofty.

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    1. I hear u says:

      Many thanks dear.

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