Don’t tell anybody, I’m on my way.
Back to my life, my smile
from formal back to informal,
Previous to my mistakes
from cabbage stamp to flying slippers,
Flash of my breakfast
from words like 'bitch' to the words in starter 'idiot',
Memories of my bitter yougert
from naked feets to random fits,
Revising my chapters of unsolicited life
from fantasy of hearts to illusion of behavior,
These evocations and time are like sand
feels like in no time I'm on land..
Fantastic framework of memories designed by a mind blowing writer
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I am glad that you like it. Thabks for your kind appreciation.
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SMiLes Dear Yam Isn’t It True How Some Avenues
Set Us Free to Be All Of Who We Felt We Couldn’t Be Before
And How Some Avenues We Return to Take Us Back To Where
We Were Before Now
How Fortunate Are We
To Be Able to Ascend
And Transcend Wherever
We May Fall or Rise to Authentically
Be Who We Feel and Sense to Be Now
Such A Challenge Though Depending
On How Far A Flight Back Home is
To Rise Again
Free Enough
To Retain Balance
of Who We Really Feel
And Sense to Be Genuinely Indeed..:)
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I had just wrote only one incident. The tragedy that happen to her is after that event of remembering.
Thanks for reading dear, I agree to your words
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Thatβs Sad Dear
Yam So Hard to
Forget When
Folks Now
Remember
What Was
Too Hard
For Reality Then π
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Indeed..
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π
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It takes courage
the unevenness
of life to endure
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And courage needs your patience.
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the humility
endures
that what
we don’t
to change
us know
what we
not
to change
are able to
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Exactly…
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I have big ansuus in my eyes.. Janii… To see u hereπ₯Ίπ₯Ί… May good bless u more
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ansuusπ€£π€£. Too touching
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We’re all on the road
whether the others talk about it or not
the way
between the inner world and the outer world
the reality of the soul
the human life
holds together through all lows and highs
our real doing and creating
to understand the soul’s own dream
and step by step in awakening
trying to get the best out of it
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Agreed to your point of view.
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Great piece, creative framework.
You are getting better by each post!
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Thank you dear so much. I am glad to know this.
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Wonderful.
Keep at it the future is bright!
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Sureπππ
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Beautifully written ! memories take you on land! Well shared πβΊ
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Thank you dear so much for your keen words.ππ
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Humorous poem dear but the last couple is quite intellectual. I like this
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I am glad that you like this
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This again is a beautiful poem. The last two stanzas are awesome. Well penned π
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I am really glad to know this. Thank you so much for such appreciative words
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It’s my pleasure π
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ππ
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Your sense of humor is really good ππ
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Thanks for the compliment, Daniel
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Beautiful
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πππ
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